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Explain Writing Marae.

Here is my explain writing sample.

My Goal Setting Term 4 2019.

Recount Writing-Mini Golf.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

On the holidays my family and I went to Funzone to go to 

Mini golf in Hamilton. 

First we went to Room 1 to start our game.

After we were finished in
Room 1 we went to Room 2. 

When I was there I was so nervous I could not stop smiling. 

I put my ball in 1st but my brother
put his ball in the hole 4 times.
Next we went to part 13. I think my sister won on part 13. 

After that the last mini golf ramp was the ball to go up this hill 

and it had 3 holes for the ball. In comes the

ball from the tunnel and into the hole.

After that we had a little play with the funzone devices. 

I really enjoyed my day there.   

Matariki star.

My New Year celebraton.

My New Year celebraton.

My birthday.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

My birthday.

At home it was my birthday. I was turning 7. 

First me and my papa went to The Warehouse. 

At The Warehouse me and my papa  bought a whole lot of stuff for me.                                                                                                         Then me and my papa went to Countdown to get the mince, apples and pineapples. 

Me and my family wanted to cook a pineapple and apple pie. After that me and my papa went home. 

Next I opened my presents. I was so happy to have lovely presents.

Later on I opened all my presents. My brothers wanted to play with my stuff but I didn’t want them to play with my stuff because they were just new. I didn’t want them to break my presents.

Finally me and my family had dinner. The dinner was very yummy.

I had an amazing day.                                                                    

My learning.

My rangoli pattern.

I made this rangoli pattern to welcome visits to our  classroom.                        

My learning.

Pinwheels

WAL about rotational Symmetry.

Today my class and I made some pinwheels
we had to copy our teacher so we knew
what to do.

If you use a bead for a spacer the pinwheel
won’t get stuck on the

Handle.

Persuasive Writing-Homework.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

Homework

I think we should do homework every day.

Firstly I think we should do homework every day to practice our spelling and our reading. Then we can get better at spelling and reading.

Secondly, I think we should do our homework every day so that  we can give our brain a workout and so that we can get a hundred percent in our spelling.  

So that is why I think we should do our homework every day.

Scratch Junior

 I am learning to code using Scratch Junior.

I like making my characters move.

It is very cool.

I have made 4 animations.

Recount Writing-My cousin's house.

WALT write our ideas in order.
Last night I went to my cousin's house.

My cousins name is Kolin.

We played hopscotch.

Hopskotch is a fun game

We can play. We played Hopscotch the other day

again.

Facility.

What is a facility?

A place that you do stuff in

Like the pool

The playground

The class

The schooL

The green Room

The hall and

The field    

Recount Writing-At the zoo.

I am learning to write my ideas in the right order.

The zoo.

On the Holidays I travelled to Hamilton with my family to go to the zoo

I felt excited. My Mum had the tickets.

First we had a feed. Then I saw lots of

animals. My favourite animal was the Spider

Monkey.

Looking at the animals was fun. I was so happy.

After  that we went home and had a rest.

I had a fun day with my family at the zoo.

Happy Mothers day.

My Mum is amazing because she looks after me.

She has the best hopes for me.

Mum cuddles me and hugs me. She loves me very much

and I love her so so much.

She washes and dries the clothes and folds them.

She does the dishes and dries them.  

She helps my brothers and my sisters.

My Term 2 Learning Goals

I will try my best to achieve my learning goals this term.

Persuasive Writing-Brushing Teeth

WALT use the correct language and structure for Persuasive Writing.

Brushing teeth

Teeth are important for chewing our food.

We need to look after them.

So I think we should brush our teeth every day.

Firstly I think we should brush our teeth everyday

so that we can have nice smelling teeth so we can look after our enamel.

Secondly I think we should brush our teeth every day because we need to look after our teeth.

If we don’t all of the germs will go in our teeth

and hurt our teeth.

Thirdly I think we should brush our teeth every day

so we can have clean teeth and very nice smiles.

So that is why I think we should brush our teeth every day.

Recount Writing-At Timezone

I am learning to write my ideas in the right order.

At Timezone.

In the holidays I went to Timezone in Whangarei. Timezone had so many games. There I was playing bowling the wheel of fortune. I played Flappy Bird.

It was cool fun.

My sister gave me 16 tickets.

When I played my games I had 163 tickets.

I took my tickets to swap for my prizes.

I got a lucky dip and a lamb booklet.

I still had 80 more tickets left.

My brother had 845 tickets.

I enjoyed my day at Timezone especially winning prizes.

My 2019 learning wall.

Here is my learning wall. It tells me what level I should be on and what level am I on.

Recount Writing-My sister's birthday.

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings to my writing.

On Saturday it was my sister’s birthday. My sister was

turning 14. Me and my family brought lots of presents.

I got her some kind of oil. It is for your hair.

It smells yum and it makes your hair get more

curlier. Next we brought my sister’s birthday cake.

Then we had dinner. We had Jimmy Jacks.

The food was yummy.

After that me and my family had my sister’s birthday cake.

It was a sponge cake. It was very yum.

Finally we went to bed.

I thought it was a lovely family day. I was so happy.          

Recount Writing-At the Beach.

I am learning to write my ideas in the right order.

On the holidays me and my family went to the beach.

First we had a feed. Next we had a swim. It was

a lovely cool swim. Both of my brothers were at

the deep end. I wasn’t at the deep end

because it was too deep. The waves were so

rough. After that we walked out of the beach and had a rest. Then we went home.

I had a fun day at the beach. I was so happy.

Recount Writing-The zoo.

I am learning to write my ideas in the right order.

The zoo.

On the Holidays I travelled to Hamilton

with my family to go to the zoo

I felt excited. My Mum had the tickets.

First we had a feed. Then I saw lots of

animals. My favourite animal was the Spider

Monkey.

Looking at the animals was fun. I was so happy.

After  that we went home and had a rest.

I had a fun day.

The Treaty of Waitangi

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