Recount Writing-Mini Golf.

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On the holidays my family and I went to Funzone to go to 

Mini golf in Hamilton. 

First we went to Room 1 to start our game.

After we were finished in
Room 1 we went to Room 2. 

When I was there I was so nervous I could not stop smiling. 

I put my ball in 1st but my brother
put his ball in the hole 4 times.
Next we went to part 13. I think my sister won on part 13. 

After that the last mini golf ramp was the ball to go up this hill 

and it had 3 holes for the ball. In comes the

ball from the tunnel and into the hole.

After that we had a little play with the funzone devices. 

I really enjoyed my day there.