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My amazing holidays at Karangahake.
On Friday afternoon my family and I traveled to the mountains in Karangahake. First we went in the car and started driving to the mountains. I was so excited to go.
I was as happy as a clown. Karangahake is a beautiful mountain also called by a Maunga with lots of stairs and very dark tunnels. Next we were finally there. But did you know we were actually in the mountains? It was kind of like a gold mine. We had to cross very wiggly bridges.
I was so scared I was terrified. Then we walked up the stairs and started walking. Those mountains have amazing nature. I couldn’t believe it. It also had gorgeous rivers and it was beautiful. We ended up by a very dark tunnel like I said very dark tunnel in the beginning. Luckily everyone had their phones. Suddenly everyone's phones started to run out of battery. Then we ended up in another dark tunnel. My brother and I went inside of it and waited for everyone to come. When everyone came I gave them a magnificent fright. My sister was so terrified but my brother and I were laughing hard out. After that we walked past a waterfall. Then we noticed that the water was spring water. My Dad went up the waterfall and filled up his bottle with that water. Then my other brother went up. He tasted it and the next minute he said, “That water is very fresh.” Then we all tasted it. We loved it so much, so we ended up bringing some home. I said, “How are we going to bring some home?” My mum said,”By getting the bottles in my bag.” We were nearly finished our walk.Then we started walking a little bit faster and then we were finally nearly at our car. My legs were very tired. We went over the wiggly bridge and went to the car. Finally we drove home. By the time we were home it started to rain. I snuggled up in my blanket and relaxed for a little while. I had the coolest marvelous time with my family.
I thought it was a delightful and magnificent holiday.
