I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings to my writing.
On Saturday it was my sister’s birthday. My sister was
turning 14. Me and my family brought lots of presents.
I got her some kind of oil. It is for your hair.
It smells yum and it makes your hair get more
curlier. Next we brought my sister’s birthday cake.
Then we had dinner. We had Jimmy Jacks.
The food was yummy.
After that me and my family had my sister’s birthday cake.
It was a sponge cake. It was very yum.
Finally we went to bed.
I thought it was a lovely family day. I was so happy.
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