Here is my explain writing sample.
I am a year 4 learner at Tautoro School in Northland, New Zealand. I am Room 5 and my teacher is Mrs Paraha.
Tuesday, October 29, 2019
Tuesday, October 22, 2019
Recount Writing-Mini Golf.
WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
On the holidays my family and I went to Funzone to go to
Mini golf in Hamilton.
First we went to Room 1 to start our game.
After we were finished in
Room 1 we went to Room 2.
Room 1 we went to Room 2.
When I was there I was so nervous I could not stop smiling.
I put my ball in 1st but my brother
put his ball in the hole 4 times.
Next we went to part 13. I think my sister won on part 13.
put his ball in the hole 4 times.
Next we went to part 13. I think my sister won on part 13.
After that the last mini golf ramp was the ball to go up this hill
and it had 3 holes for the ball. In comes the
ball from the tunnel and into the hole.
After that we had a little play with the funzone devices.
I really enjoyed my day there.
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