WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
My birthday.
At home it was my birthday. I was turning 7.
First me and my papa went to The Warehouse.
At The Warehouse me and my papa bought a whole lot of stuff for me. Then me and my papa went to Countdown to get the mince, apples and pineapples.
Me and my family wanted to cook a pineapple and apple pie. After that me and my papa went home.
Next I opened my presents. I was so happy to have lovely presents.
Later on I opened all my presents. My brothers wanted to play with my stuff but I didn’t want them to play with my stuff because they were just new. I didn’t want them to break my presents.
Finally me and my family had dinner. The dinner was very yummy.
I had an amazing day.